monkzine volume 1 preview

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If you have the time and interest, please preview the pages below and send me any notes you have on them as far as things that could be improved or changed, anything from as minor as a typo or "this background embellishment is crowding a bit too close to one of the illustrations" to "the writing here is a bit meh" to "this whole page sucks and should get scrapped/redone" but hopefully worded nicer than that.

Also the page order here is very much not finalized and also p31 is a 2-page spread so the page numbers after that should all be advanced by one but I'm too lazy to fix that at this point. I'll shuffle things around once I finally load them into Indesign. Likewise the text kerning and leading will all hopefully get tightened up at that point as well. That said, any suggestions on page order and text formatting are still welcome.